Uninspired Poem by David DeSantis

Uninspired

Rating: 5.0


Apathetic tendencies
fall upon the best of us,
Yet I'm not really sure
why they've fallen upon me.

I'm certainly not the best,
and far from the worst,
but instead find myself
stuck somewhere in between.

It's quite possible however,
that housed inside
this tired brain,
is the recollection
of a cut so deep
that apathy
is its only
relief.

Copyright (c) David DeSantis

Wednesday, August 20, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: apathy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 06 January 2009

a very nice piece. cant wait to read more

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 22 September 2008

Hello again David and uninspired doesn't describe this poem, it is awesome! Loyd

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Kris Smith 20 August 2008

Going through a bit of this myself, poignant piece David thanks Chris 10

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