Unforgettable Poem by Bani Marathe

Unforgettable

Rating: 4.4


Unforgettable! That's what you are
Diving deep into my thoughts all the more..
Never meant to complicate your life
Always wanted to be by your side
But Alas! My heart is so weak and so tempted.

Lived every moment spent with you
Loved every dream I dreamt when not with you
Wanted to share every secret with you but
Never thought of falling in love with you.

What is it that exists between us so strong
Pulls me in closer everytime I try to breakfree
Feeling so helpless trying to hold my emotions
Failing miserably but still not giving up.

It wasn't your fault, may be a bit mine
But I am glad and hold no regrets
You gave me the best time of my life.
Unforgettable... yes indeed it is! !

Sunday, March 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling,love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2017

Diving deep into my thoughts! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 March 2017

And quiet flows the Don and this poem too. Thanks for sharing this poem on PH.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 March 2020

Such a nice start, Bani. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2017

@Bani Marathe, Welcome to poemHunter! Your first poem posted here is an excellent piece. Appreciating the precious time spent with a very dear one is what the poem is about. You have described the feelings quite eloquently, to which at least I can relate myself perfectly well. Well done, poet! Happy writing!

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2017

Beautiful depiction of mighty spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss, well drafted and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Bani and do remain blessed.

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Kezia Kezia 05 March 2017

lovely poem. thanks for sharing.

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Jay Master 05 March 2017

Love your poem! I can definitely relate to this.

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