Un Poema De Aventura Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Un Poema De Aventura

Rating: 4.9


I travel up to Andes mountains
maybe a little bit hard to get there
but still I can touch a friendly gesture
I can smell fragrance of shiny gardens

O Beloved Poet! O Gabriella Mistral!
fill me, inspire me until ethereal
with your gracious words
vivacious rhymes

I travel down to Cuban ocean
maybe a little bit deeper
I can sense brighter
a colorful haven

O Dear Poet! O Che Guevara!
pour me, move me with aura
of your vigorous sentences
profane-patriotic themes

I travel through Chilean aces
I go alone without partner
maybe a little bit farther
there is a lovely oasis

O My Poet! O Pablo Neruda!
drown me, pull me into
sensuous of Nirvana
deepest feeling too

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Allan Macli Borges)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 30 March 2009

The title is wonderfully characteristic of the contents of this writing. The writer weaves an adventurous travel to various places with an expression of admiration for those who inspire him. I love writings of such clarity. They make reading more pleasurable. GW62

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Patti Masterman 30 March 2009

This poem is very passionate and original

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Anthony Foster 30 March 2009

Pulls out the deepest feeling in the as the words are so fine.

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Barry A. Lanier 31 March 2009

a beginning synopsis of the Who's Who of poetry, , , , love to see a further extrpolation...

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Ency Bearis 31 March 2009

a great travel write with deepest feeling of inspirational verses...

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

I love the title, the lines, and have always adored Pablo Neruda, and just his name is impelling..even after so many years he has been gone. Thanks for the trip..(smile)

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Omar Ibrahim 01 July 2009

bennissimo! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Beautiful tribute to the poets of the world-how our voices speak through our poems! ! ! ! ! ! Another ten from me.

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Allan Macli Borges 05 April 2009

one more beautiful tribute, finely written to praise the masters of us all...10

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Shekhar Joshi 03 April 2009

I have only heard and read pablo neruda. The poems nice. I liked its flow Good work

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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