Two See Your Suicide Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Two See Your Suicide



In the middle of the room
the hand moves so slowly.
The petals open for years
rich in tears by the window
packed around, a faded rose.

Where ever spring stayed
full and green each stem was.
The one thorn so familiar did
always bring a bout two curtsy.

The swelling finger swoons gently
as the swan opens white long wings,
as feet push into the water, flying off.

The rose, now weeps to the touch
never to be touched, and life it spills.
Lifting the vase bitter tasting is sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Are you talking about euthanasia or a pre-planned murder of somebody a terminaly ill person himself can't have? Mercy killing in this case wouldn't apply - to be honest I don't support it... Ineresting, nicely penned write... Thank you for sharing...

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Luwi Habte 29 July 2009

nice poem, hey where were did u lost, welcome back again Luwi

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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