Twin Triplets. No.5. Infinity, Hope Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets. No.5. Infinity, Hope

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Infinity

Parallel lines stretching, stretching, ing..ng…g!
Neither made to intersect
Nor meant to pause

Hope

A rain cloud suspended
Between the vault of heaven above
And the parched land below

Monday, February 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 12 February 2013

Distilled thoughts in the Twin Triplets of Infinity and Hope are greatly STRIKING! Your imagination is very ENCHANTING!

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Muhammad Ali 27 October 2015

Wow. If I can reach the beauty of this twin triplets... it is the plot of life, for all the novels especially love. And it is also the fuel for burning, burning inner self.

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2016

Infinity stretches forever, even from the parched land to heaven it continues to stretch. Beautiful lines of life! 10++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Valerie Dohren 14 February 2013

Love your twin triplets Valsa - Hope here, great verse.

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 May 2015

Twin Triplets are so beautifully presented....Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 February 2019

A rain can be suspended but emotion still is in flow to gather many memories. We have unlimited hopes in life. The land of emotion carries these. Life needs light of wisdom and we carry hope of dignity of living. An excellent poem is beautifully penned...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

Parallel lines stretching, stretching, .......nice imagination of infinity. Both triplets are marvelous.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2016

Always learning and, moving on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2016

hey! ! i like this. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2016

It's infinity of time and space that I am constrained to believe in a God. Stretching of parallel thoughts start from ing- I need God, ng - no God, g - God.

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