Try Again Poem by susette varga

Try Again

Rating: 5.0


Too strong a bond
To let it go
Realising and accepting
Our differing flaws

Missing each other
And our quirky ways
Was hard to continue
Our seperate ways

To follow our hearts
Was the only way
Intuition never
Does you wrong

Laying foundations
Makes a heart sing
Together our song
Paved the way

Our special connection
now brings us close
To what we aspire to
And what we will be

Our intimate partnership
And mental compatibility
Brings Romance and friendship
In to play

Emotion and passion
Sparks our match
Sexual fulfilment
Keeps us satisfied

Laughter and fun
Keeps us engaged
Appreciative lovers
Pleasure we take

Balancing friendship
With romance
Allows us both
A second chance

We finally see
Just what it takes
To unconditionally love
And up the stakes

We tried the alternative
Long lonely weeks
The sadness that hugged us
Thankfully made us see

A life without you
We could not bear
Happiness would not find us
Until both were near

Two happy hearts
Together again
Lost souls entwined
Never again will part

True love undoubtedly
Will always find
The purest heart
To seduce the right mind

Thursday, February 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 February 2018

Well penned.. liked it... thanks for sharing

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

Beautiful poem, may it light out all dark heart :)

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Thanks guys... your comments are so very appreciated x

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2018

Missing each other! ! Love and life! With memories. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nicole Settimi 11 August 2018

Very lovely poem & well articulated ups and downs of love. Favorite lines / stanza: 'We finally see Just what it takes To unconditionally love And up the stakes' Love the nurturing aspect of it!

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Lovely lines that are loaded with love. A captivating composition that is very refreshing!

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Bri Edwards 02 May 2018

i'm sending your poem to another member, Bharati Nayak, because she sent me a note about 'love', and i liked your poem a lot. i think i forgot to send it to MyPoemList yesterday; i plan on doing it after sending this comment. // when i copied and pasted your poem, the computer underlined fulfilment (i guess it should be fulfillment) and seperate (separate) . i did not notice them before now. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2018

PLEASE SEND ME AN ANNOUNCEMENT WHEN YOU TWO BREAK UP! ! ! I MAY BE INTERESTED. BRI :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

Emotion and passion Sparks our match Sexual fulfilment Keeps us satisfied..a great love poem.. the purity of heart....seducing the righ minded....... thank you dear poetess. tony

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