Troubled Poem by Mindy Brown

Troubled



My life never really seemed simple,
Always I had a lonely troubled life.
I forever had an ache and a pimple,
And each day that went by never felt right.

I guess my love for my family was strong,
But I longed for a true challenge.
I never wanted my life to go wrong,
But where I ran, I found bitter knowledge.

The thought of freedom from this haunted me,
Leaving me to muse what I truly sought.
I just crave love, not to see the true me,
Love never truly found me, I never was caught.

Love never is kind to those who plead daily,
So daily, I spot the ugly part of the daisy.

* i created this for a school assignment its not so good but i like it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coach Roth 14 November 2008

I like it too...raw and honest...your choice of words and images help us understand and relate to your feelings...Coach

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