Thousands dip in the Holy Ganges
And emerge clean
Making the holy waters filthy
Like the sewage from a drainage
This transference leaves
Many a holy place, unholy
This transference leaves ad the holy water gives power of enrichment. Such holy water such holy water should be clean. An excellent poem is interestingly penned with care and beauty. Reading this again we are very happy....10
This transference leaves Many a holy place, unholy. yes very true. we have to think of our religious customs and change our ways. who shll do it? That is the question..... we poets should bring these points up and bring a new change for all of us. thank u dear professor. tony
Thousands dip in the Holy Ganges and emerge clean….many a holy place, unholy! Appreciated the psyche of this beautiful little poem! (10)
Religious people have beliefs that taking dips in Ganges is holy but it isn't really, instead it makes unholy. Dip of the soul in spiritual knowledge-water is holy and it can make the mind free to get peace. A beautiful poem shared.
The impact of thousands seeking cleansing of the holy waters does take it's toll. A small verse that has sudden impact on the senses.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We can only cleanse the soul through kind acts. There is no way to cleanse the body. I liked your poem nicely put.