Tour Poem by Carol Snow

he sweep it first then spread camellias

Very interesting. I enjoyed it.

Fairly boring but fairly interesting

Nice! Evokes that quality of Japan and Japanese culture that some of us are really drawn to.

smooth poem but with depth. Thank you

It makes a mockery of poetry. It's drivel from the lips of vanity.

I like this......Thank you: -)

The depth is surprisingly huges if you start really to think........... about the - after all - not at all simple words you wrote. elliedaphnevanstralen dot com