As I think of you here,
remembering such times of joy,
as you held my hand,
kissing me ever so tenderly,
murmuring the phrase, 'I love you, '
made me feel so special in this world,
as my heart beated faster at your presence,
I stared at your beauty ad infinitum,
holding you in my arms,
not wanting to let you go.
As this seems as a dream,
since you left me here alone,
wanting you to be here with me,
as you have taken what has been dear to me,
leaving me heartless, frozen in this room,
as no emotions seem to run through me,
me being an empty shell, not thinking,
seeing you walk away slowly with my heart,
farther away as this hole in my chest bleeds,
leaving me to pass away lonely.
'leaving me heartless, frozen in this room'...ouch. aww, javi. it's really good and really sad. You express your emotions well in your poems. You incorporate vivid feelings that leave me eaither rly happy or depressed. lol. but it's rly good. wonderful poem from a wonderful poet! <3
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree with May May, you are VERY good at using your emotions at all the right places.... ..your one of my fav. poets :)