Torture Poem by Javier Falcon

Torture



I sit at the edge of this lake,
looking out into the calm water,
separating alternate dimensions.

As calmness surrounds me,
yet turmoil spins in my mind,
as being poked by needles.

My thoughts hurt with each upcoming,
burning holes through my skull,
wishing that I could shut this off.

Trying to let my surroundings help,
even so they make me worse,
as I see I will never reach that point.

Always being tormented by my thoughts,
of not having you with me here,
always running away from the truth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
May Namoc 11 August 2008

strong words. i like your details and ur emotion. love it<3 <3 u know who!

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Keith Foley 10 August 2008

This poem shows strong emotion. I liked it. Sorry (for your pain) if this poem has truth to the content. Love can hurt if its not strait from/for God. When directed at/for people there will be torture. You captured that in your poem, well done. If you get a chance review/read some of mine. Keith

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Javier Falcon

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Miami, Florida
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