Too Times I Fell Poem by David Wood

Too Times I Fell

Rating: 5.0


Too times I fell when climbing
Through climbing two quickly,
Going from bolder to bolder
I should have been less boulder.

But the cannon was to get to
The top quickly, go like a canon
At this great climbing sight
That all climbers had in their site.

There were several wholes in the
Rock, but on the hole, it was a
Good climb. When you reach the peek
There were several views you can peak at.

At the top you would real in the rope
And abseil down, a reel thrill.
Kicking the rock with the soul
Of your feet, twas good for the sole.

Even when I was knew to climbing
I new it would be an exciting sport.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are several homophones in the English language, like buy and bye, they are the plague of all writers and poets! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

The varied landscapes of a climb capture ones attention… your poem won me over! !

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Deliberate grammatical or usage mistakes using homophones, a fun adventure.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2022

Hilarious poem, I can't stop loving..........laughing I mean....Top Score!

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Nice. Fantastic play on homophones. I speak, read and write three or four languages. But there is nothing like the homophones in English

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Bri Edwards 27 December 2022

The Notes may also reassure readers that the author is not completely nuts. Although a poem comment which I recently received from this author was crude and nearly cruel, I HOPE it was only a poor joke meant to be humorous. ;) ? ? bri

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Bri Edwards 27 December 2022

This WAS interesting, but I did not find it amusing. At least you posted an explanatory Poet's Notes. The Notes may help readers, not proficient in English. be alerted to intentional errors.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 December 2022

This put me in a good mood Bravo! ! !

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M. Asim Nehal 21 December 2022

Ha ha ha...humorous poem wisely written. At first i thought what you are up (two) and then enjoyed it thoroughly.

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