Together We Live. Poem by William Breland

Together We Live.

Rating: 3.5


Watching the sunset, on the beach, forever in love, our hearts will teach. One thing, I'd like to give, is ths poem, together we live. without you, at my side, causes this feeling, I cannot hide. The glistening waves, and stars in the sky, reminds me of you, and the sparkle in your eyes. Together we live, and strong will we stand, running our toes, through the soft beach sand. Holding each other, warm and close, is like a medicine, without the dose. Together we live. Sadness is gone, because we learned to share, to take the time, to be concerned and care. now our life, is one big smile, together we live, for a loving long while. On a special day, and you cannot give, just remember in your heart, Together we live..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kearbear pie lover 21 June 2009

this is my favorite poem of yours i put it on my favorite poem list =) I LOVE YOUR POEMS =) -Kearbear your poetry buddy

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Very descriptive. And a really nice poem! I love how you used the scene on the beach to display your topic.

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DaNa XxX 13 June 2009

hey will, this is a brillent poem...! ! i liked it! ..i really can feel the Passion between the lines.. great job! ..^_^

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