Candle Of Love Poem by William Breland

Candle Of Love

Rating: 5.0


As the flame flickers, up high above, you make my heart melt, from the candle of love. You give me light, when I can't see, you take my sadness, and set it free. The candle of love. Always there, day or night, you guide me in, with your shimmering light. You are there to warm me, when I am cold, always around, for me to hold. The candle of love. You have understanding, and show me concern, forever in my heart, your candle will burn. When the power is out, you're always there, to give me comfort, and show me care. The candle of love. This may be a poem, but the feelings are real, from your candle of love, you made me feel. How proud I am, to be at your side, now I have light, I don't have to hide. The candle of love. For you my dear, you make me live, in return, I'd like to give. My candle of love. I Love You!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crystle Jones 23 June 2009

awww, this one is sweet. very great work! ! ! ! !

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Hazel Hale 22 June 2009

wow sweet i hope ur wish comes true

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Melissa Cundill 16 June 2009

its really romantic. i love it x

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I love this metaphor. It reminds me of how the women would light up the lighthouse for their husband sailor. Or at least the tale about that. Nice poem!

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Merna Ibrahim 16 June 2009

So romantic..so emotional..so sweet...and your real love is evident! ! Merna

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