To Me, My Love....... Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

To Me, My Love.......

Rating: 5.0


To me, my love, never been ruled,
With dusty stars, in I despair,
Bringing me to days; unfair,
Where help's never helped, with when love is glued.

To me, my love, hot summer's lone queen,
To it applauds winter's dead heart
With his embedded eyes left unhurt,
Which seeks its charm, never does sin.

To me, my love, blind bay's lone friend,
With relations being its baby's cradle song,
For its height never be taken and I go wrong,
It shall paint itself with old colors and never does end.

To me, my love, not a vindictive man's historical revenge,
Shall never alter when to it death's door cage.

Sunday, November 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 November 2014

nice poem on love so nice- your words-To me, my love, not a vindictive man's historical revenge, Shall never alter when to it death's door cage. keep it up

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

beautiful poem on love....nice......

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 November 2014

So nicely crafted with loving, charming words........wonderful poem on feelings of love.....top marks

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 November 2014

nice work, young poet. kudos for that.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

Beautiful poem on love. Beautify imagery of words used with seasons of nature. I loved the lines... To me, my love, not a vindictive man's historical revenge, Shall never alter when to it death's door cage. Loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 05 November 2014

a good poem on love well expressed keep writing dear poet freind

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Bernard Snyder 05 November 2014

Great poem! I love this one a lot, Saheb. Quite impressive. Well-deserved 10' from me! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2014

Nice work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Neela Nath Das 04 November 2014

Yes, you're right.Love knows to forgive the betrayer.A true lover never takes revenge.Great!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2014

An impressive poem........................10

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