Time Will Tell Poem by Lora Colon

Time Will Tell

Rating: 3.7


How mindlessly on Life's ocean we float,
Practicing deceit, causing tears to fall,
While a witness silently takes note -
Time sees and hears all

Not one false vow made in the name of Love
Will escape Time's ever watchful eyes;
Like thawing snow reveals the frozen dove,
Time unveils all lies

Tears carve channels that are easy to trace,
Brows are furrowed by promises broken;
You need only look upon my face.......
The years have spoken

Wednesday, February 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: insensitivity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 22 February 2019

Yes, time records, every wrinkle on my face is an archive of my deeds and misdeeds.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 February 2019

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 February 2019

Not one false vow made in the name of Love Will escape Time's ever watchful eyes; Like thawing snow reveals the frozen dove, Time unveils all lies WOW THAT SAYS ALL LC 1000000++++++++++++++++++++++=VOTE FROM ME I AM A TIME SPECIALIST KNOW YE

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 March 2019

excellent poem on TIME but time is silent love and revenge are human You may like to pass some time reading a few of my better poems LC I think you have once

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Tom Allport 08 March 2019

A very thoughtful write of how different times leave their scars.

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Bri Edwards 07 March 2019

Why, Time, you rascally critter, YOU, take a break! ! ! Let some fresh air through, some sunshine, moonbeams, and cream of cow, to wipe furrows and channels from Lora's cheeks and brow. It's bad enough that the rest of her body is decaying, without making her face haggard, so don't be delaying! If I must I'll offer MY brow [and cheeks (all four) ] to you instead, as long as you lay off Lora, my friend, who's so near to looking dead! ! ! :) bri

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Lora Colon 07 March 2019

I was wondering when you'd appear on the scene to sully these hallowed grounds, Ha. Just kidding, all are welcome here... even you!

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Khairul Ahsan 04 March 2019

This poem gets 10/10 from me. Time is a silent witness of truth.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 March 2019

'Time unveils all lies' - what a sublime thought, what a sublime truth spoken so simply! Nice poem Lora!

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Missouri - United States
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