Like a blow with a fist
That moment I knew
What you did then
And contnue to do
In that instant I knew
What I'd gone through
Was mainly all
Because of you
Yet, I've done nothing wrong
Which you surely must know
All I can think of
You just hate me so
Another lesson learned
And at least I now know
It is time to move on
It is time to let go
Well written liked it… Simple crisp and straight yet loaded with sorrow…the ache and hurt of lost love. One picks up courage, as wave upon wave crashes in, some elevating some plunging to the abysmal depths…as life goes on Blessed be Sat
I dind this to be very well written. The rhyming kept me glued to the end
dear poet Hate is a word to hate Love is a word to love And life is a word to remember To live with love and passion
Another lesson learned And at least I now know It is time to move on It is time to let go. liked these lines very much. yes let go is a lesson that we learn that we learn on life's Way. you have presented it in a very fine way. thank you very much. tony
First line: Like a blow with a fist reminded me of my poem NEVER GIVE UP. Keep writing.
A powerful message to all those that are going through distress in relationships. A well articulated poem, well penned to capture the essence of the piece, and the conviction of the poet. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Precise and concise. A sad story beautifully presented. A lovely work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it's time to let go a certain truth I know yet i can't leave the memory of your kiss of your hiss of your touch I long so much how to let my soul my core my deepen whole how to let my heart go far and do apart I see you learned a lesson and I must learn how to take my heart tho' rapt yat freedom earn nice poem it recalls memories tho' sweet yet painful thank you for the read.