Shallowness Poem by Vanessa Hughes

Another lovely poem....I have written one myself very similar to yours in vein...but it's in Maltese. I love your style. Edmund

Very nice poem. It's funny how the shallowness of another, limits ourselves.10.

Fantastic - u r a great writer - SG

had to comment on this one again..the more i read it the more it speaks to me..very wise write! SG

there was a time i couldnt swim... i was all the wrong things biggoted closed minded...then i was given a second chance... this a a wonderful read ;)

How do you grow in shallow waters When around you are small minds Closed, bigotted opinions Of the mind-damaging kind A poem with a purpose which declares a war against all pseudo people with low aimed opinions around.A very well written poem Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Another fantastic poem - love your work.

beautifully written, again! good work...I love your style of putting words to the thoughts in your head! You have got some depth, appreciate it really =)

I really love your poetry. I really feel like this sometimes, like I'm put into a box and told to grow into it, but to never break free. I love this, so much.

we really need space to grow. its sad to realize that our potential is hampered just because we can't freely breathe! ! very mind opening..excellent poem.. thank you.. diane