Time - Tick Tock Poem by Chant Gud

Time - Tick Tock



When peace has faded to a warzone,
And the cold burns your warm skin,
While the young are closer to death,
The eldery remember their youth,

One realises time is a fantasy,
Something wanted, needed for some,
Yet we all believe,
Tick, tock, tick, tock

The memories slowly disappear,
Living, once again continues,
And the fantasy remains,
Remains within society, within ourselves.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 November 2009

you have written and expressed this poem poetically. It is good.

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Ying Escalona 09 November 2009

i prefer time in fantasy..probably, that would be too short :)

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Eyan Desir 09 November 2009

Well written poem... tic tic tic...

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