Till I Shine Poem by Renson Opati

Till I Shine

Rating: 5.0


Before the morning sun,
The voice still calls me hun,
In the morning dew still can run,
My feet cannot stun,
The love is mine,
Till I shine.

I have faced the tide,
I have lost pride,
I made some strides,
In challenges still can glide,
I can grow big and wide,
The love is mine,
Till I shine

We can't all climb a pine,
But one can drink some wine,
In parties, we opt to dine,
When holy we opt for the vine,
Let's learn to protect our spine,
The love is mine,
Till I shine

Til I shine, I will wine and dine, the love is mine

Till I Shine
Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This came to me while in a world of fantasy. Posted it severally on my blog.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 26 May 2019

Write comment. Beautiful start, Renson. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 January 2016

Before morning sun voice calls on with expressive love and you shine with sun rays. A marvelous work shared really. Nicely penned poem.10

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Renson Opati 07 January 2016

thank you so much. Al keep it up next time

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