Those Who Have Not Arrived Yet Poem by Amitava Sur

Those Who Have Not Arrived Yet

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Those who have not arrived yet
Please don’t endeavor to appear
On this earth of nowadays, anymore.
What will be the use by increasing the number
Unnecessarily, amongst this crowd of
Either inactive or helpless people,
Or else to become another Frankenstein?

Remember, you’ll not be able
To proceed even a single step with your choice,
They’ll not allow you excepting being forced
To walk in a path as you'll be guided by them.

Truth and justice being disobeyed here
Being overpowered by dishonesty.
What will be the use by increasing the number
Unnecessarily, amongst this crowd of
Either inactive or helpless people?
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Amitava (11.9.2015)

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Tuesday, September 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 16 September 2015

Your poem echoes frustration of many who feel unhappy about what we see and hear. However I do hope every new life comes with new hope and new aspirations and strives to make world a better place. Very nice and timely poem Amitav. Thanks for sharing. also thank you so much for your recent comment on my poem.

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Valsa George 29 October 2015

I can sense the frustration in your feeling mind! But we have to accept everything in our stride! Sometimes we feel baffled by the fate that awaits our progeny! If the present crises advance at this rate, it is natural for us to feel that those who haven't taken birth on this planet are fortunate! Great write, Amitava!

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Kavya . 28 September 2015

hahaha so true - given a choice i think those poor ones will definitely prefer to stay in moms womb as those are the best days they ever had - good one highlighting the helpless state of all human beings on this earth which has now been transformed into a cruel n selfish abode by our very own fellow human beings! a good write Sir.

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Amitava Sur 29 September 2015

Thank you Kavya for realizing the crux of the poem

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Mark Heathcote 18 September 2015

Over population, limited resources & everything kept well out of reach from us. We’re all becoming like drowning fish in drying stagnating pool of slime. I see your point.

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Amitava Sur 29 September 2015

Thank you for your thoughtful comment

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 September 2015

Truly, the increase in population and the decrease in morality makes one to think do,

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Amitava Sur 18 September 2015

Thank You Aralimatti for liking this poem

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2015

Crowd of people...... Nicely expressed, a powerful expression

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Amitava Sur 18 September 2015

Thank you Seema for your appreciation.

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