This Morning Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

This Morning

Rating: 4.8


Pulsating with life
Bathed in the sunshine
In cool seclusion
Amid shimmering pools of water
Amid spectral trees
The morning with its hues glides
Awakening the nature from her sleep
The restless birds on the tree-tops
Are shaking their wings
And a new plant
Quite alien to the garden
Flowering bees
And butterflies this morning
Daisies, clover and buttercup
All soaring up and gliding
Down to grassy heaven
And tiny souls
Like a fleet of ants
Seen in a lovely array
searching for grain
Oh! what a lively morning
Everyone looked primed
And had their lamps lit
To the occasion they are rising

Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 29 October 2014

Beautiful poem on a pleasant morning when with renewed energy, everyone is set for action and Nature is throbbing with fresh life! Enjoyed much!

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Salini Nair 29 October 2014

freshness of morning feel in each line....nice

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 February 2019

Mornings feel magical when the spirit is on the rise along with the day. A well-writ imaginative piece on morning one loves to read.

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2014

a great morning poem good imagery

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Loved the freshness of morning, so cool and pleasant. Loved the way you presented it.

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Hazel Durham 29 October 2014

Nature vividly expressed in such a stunning way I really enjoyed this beautiful write!

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Piyush Dey 29 October 2014

Beautiful poem, filled with such vibrant innocence a new morning.

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