This Poem Is Not For You Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

This Poem Is Not For You

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This poem is not for you
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There are many poems
Full of pathos
Full of loves
Full of emotions
Imagine what if you don't come
Heaven waits
Earth wails
Century flies
And time speechless
After sweeping up the heart
What remains?
Love a conjecture
And your turning up
An uncertainty
Until we meet eternity
Better select one
That best fits to you
Since this poem is not for you………..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 30 August 2014

A thoughtful poem searching the state of mind of the individual with a statement.. Thanks for sharing

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Roseann Shawiak 04 November 2014

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, and particularly enjoyed the last line. Explains life, love, emotions - spells it all out then you say: Better select one That best fits to you Since this poem is not for you. I love it! Great poem! ! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 November 2014

Many many thanks......Roseann......I am humbled

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2014

Fantastic poem. Beautiful lines.... And time speechless After sweeping up the heart What remains? Love a conjecture And your turning up An uncertainty Until we meet eternity....Loved reading it...

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Valsa George 25 June 2014

'If you don't come'...... the fear lingers...! But if the waiting goes till eternity, there is hope of an awaited union! Enjoyed!

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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2021

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

The title of this piece is one of a kind, an eye catcher that pulls a reader to go through. This poem is thought provoking, beautifully crafted that leaves one to linger on.

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Bharati Nayak 02 May 2015

And time speechless After sweeping up the heart What remains? - - - - - - - - - - - -Some poems may leave us speechless.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 November 2014

Best fits to you, Thanks. I like it.

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Patricia Grantham 08 November 2014

A very good write. Enjoyed the lightness of it. Sweet.

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