DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


This poem is not for you


This poem is not for you
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There are many poems
Full of pathos
Full of loves
Full of emotions
Imagine what if you don't come
Heaven waits
Earth wails
Century flies
And time speechless
After sweeping up the heart
What remains?
Love a conjecture
And your turning up
An uncertainty
Until we meet eternity
Better select one
That best fits to you
Since this poem is not for you………..

Submitted: Thursday, June 19, 2014
Edited: Thursday, June 26, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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  • Gold Star - 29,013 Points Gajanan Mishra (11/9/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    Best fits to you, Thanks. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,342 Points Patricia Grantham (11/8/2014 8:42:00 AM)

    A very good write. Enjoyed
    the lightness of it. Sweet. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 15,683 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (11/8/2014 8:53:00 AM)

    Many many thanks......Grantham........I am humbled.......

  • Gold Star - 15,683 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (11/4/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    Many many thanks......Roseann......I am humbled (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,550 Points Roseann Shawiak (11/4/2014 10:21:00 AM)

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, and particularly enjoyed the last line. Explains life, love, emotions - spells it all out then you say: Better select one That best fits to you Since this poem is not for you. I love it! Great poem! ! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,479 Points Amitava Sur (8/30/2014 7:22:00 PM)

    A thoughtful poem searching the state of mind of the individual with a statement.. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 15,683 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/31/2014 5:07:00 AM)

    Many many thanks......Amitavaji......I am humbled

  • Silver Star - 3,244 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/16/2014 2:17:00 AM)

    lovely work poet, a delight to read. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,614 Points Salini Nair (7/2/2014 12:39:00 AM)

    And time speechless
    After sweeping up the heart................like it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (6/28/2014 8:54:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem...................... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,450 Points Lyn Paul (6/27/2014 7:10:00 AM)

    The title drew me right in. I loved your words. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (6/25/2014 2:24:00 AM)

    I thought this poem was only for some of us but have now found that this was for all of us, Patnaikji. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (6/25/2014 2:24:00 AM)

    I thought this poem was only for some of us but have now found that this was for all of us, Patnaikji. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (6/25/2014 2:23:00 AM)

    I thought this poem was only for some of us but have now found that this was for all of us, Patnaikji. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,088 Points Valsa George (6/25/2014 12:39:00 AM)

    'If you don't come'...... the fear lingers...! But if the waiting goes till eternity, there is hope of an awaited union! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,088 Points Valsa George (6/25/2014 12:39:00 AM)

    'If you don't come'...... the fear lingers...! But if the waiting goes till eternity, there is hope of an awaited union! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/20/2014 1:49:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem. Beautiful lines....
    And time speechless
    After sweeping up the heart
    What remains?
    Love a conjecture
    And your turning up
    An uncertainty
    Until we meet eternity....Loved reading it... (Report) Reply

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