This Life Poem by justin walker

This Life



this life i live is not one i want. im bound by chains and tortured by creatures that are unimaginably evil. they dont feed me or give me water until im almost dead. they tear me apart mentally and physically while laughing-that cynical laugh. i cant escape and i have grown to weak to fight back. i dotn know what i did to deserve this. did i kill? did i steal? why wont they stop? the worse torture i go through is seeing other people with good lives- the people who laugh and kick me while im down. they dont know my pain. they dont know my highs or downs. wait.....i see someone....why is she not laughin? does she know sbout me? she starts to slowy inch closer towards me.....i turn and run....but i stop. i feel something in my heart. is it love or is it a trick? its a funny, good feeling.then she speaks. an angel from heaven. weeks go bye and i know it was not a trick. she loves me and i love her back.i finally tell her about my prison and its like she took the key and unlocked me from my chains. not only that she healed me and now all my scars are gone. when she kissed me. im saved. to live a life that i adore. my torturers are to week to hurt me. now that im stronger, i got to to exile them from my life. its done they are gone and now im happy. im so happy you found me lying naked and bleeding.please dont leave. you havent stared, pointed and you never laughed. i now have this happy life all because of you. i now love THIS LIFE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i like this poem... very nice ending. keep it up.

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

wow....great thoughts...amazing phrases...amazing write as a whole very touching....inspiring.... love moves in mysterious ways...and it was happening to you.....great... keep on writing justin.._maia_

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

This has something to do with your painful past, right? Nice poem and a powerful affection. Your pain is something many people go through. The difference is you go with it every day while some peoples' last about a day or so. It's a good thing someone cares for you, gives you strength to live THIS LIFE. God bless you.

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Pandora Chaos 16 December 2008

i understand ur pain, i go through the pain every day since the day i was born. Its good that ur free, i wish i could be. Great poem, keep up the good work. ~victoria~

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