Things You Said Too Quietly Poem by Lola Sanchez

Things You Said Too Quietly

Rating: 5.0


the book of things not said
or not said loud enough
is filled with
"do not go''s
'do not leave me''s
and whispered 'stay''s

but
in my book
the most repeated phrase
whispered quitely
between the sheets
into pillows
and drown in coffee cups
is
'you're losing me
don't you see? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 20 August 2021

A very pleasant read and so touching!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2021

A fascinating poem full of hidden truths so saddest and most melancholically said

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2021

So beautifully put, tenderly told and amazingly presented, I admired so much this marvelous submittance.5 Stars full on Top

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Leria Hawkins 18 August 2021

Well done, I enjoyed this poem very much - 5 stars! !

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Lola Sanchez

Lola Sanchez

Pretoria, Gauteng South Africa
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