Thelovestory. Poem by jasmine margetson

Thelovestory.

Rating: 4.0


she fluttered her eyes
he licked his lips
she giggled to herself
he grabbed his groin
she wants a kiss
he wants sum head
she imagines them married
he imagines them in bed
she drinks mint tea in the morning
and reads the paper in glee
he wakes from two day binges at twelve
and has a bowl of cereal to eat
she thinks hes perfect
he can do no wrong
he wants her to not be so clingy
and to lose sum weight
this is the stories of
opposites attract
the one where
he is dreamy
and she's too fat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sw33t Girl 08 April 2008

its sort of good. But I won't take that away from you. I like how you made it seem that the girl is perfect like the boy.

0 0 Reply
Barry Van Allen 21 March 2008

Jasmine, Well, a familliar story anyhow, there is a lot of truth going on there. B.V.A.

0 0 Reply
Blaine Mccanless 20 March 2008

thats....funny. in my opinion at least. i like the flow of it too

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success