I.Was.High. Poem by jasmine margetson

I.Was.High.

Rating: 5.0


i just want that feeling that i can fly;
then it was forked over to me;
three rounds later i was tempted to try;
tried to walk but i was swept off of my feet;
at a kites altitude; the world was mine to explore;
with slow motion; lovely colors;
my mind took my brain for a tour;
and though it was useless;
but i would be lying if i were to say i wasn't infatuated;
with barely enough room through my eyes for sight;
this very special thing made me see the world through new eyes;
everything was beautiful; nothing filled with grit or grime;
i only saw the world in enjoyment and happy times;
i smiled for hours; and for hours i laughed;
nothing could bring me down; not even a parents wrath;
i went home and presented my mother with a kiss;
for she could not calculate; she was never good at math;
and i felt at peace and content with my life;
and i made a pact with myself;
that i would never complain again; if i could feel this nice;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 31 March 2008

If this doesn't lead people to drink, nothing will. You made it sound so good, I'm tempted to try it myself. Even though I don't drink at all. Its too bad you made it sound so good. But not for your writing purpose. This was excellant. GW62

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