The You Poem by Mohamed Amine belhssen

The You

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From the Gods up above came a deep sound
Rumors about the messiah now to be found
He is unlike us, more artistic, more profound
Salvation at last, away from this beholding ground.

Far from home and into not a world of damn
Where we shall eat, drink, and frown no sound
Happiness He said, time to be forever around
Angels to flirt with, all devils are condemned.

But I don't know why does it feel like not
Again, should I waste a life which I had not?
To meditate and recall those who had fought
To tied all memories with such a dark knot.

I wanted to believe in such a beyond cure
An endless life which it did me once allure
But I am such a Bohemian boy, so terribly sure
That once I am Dark, I can never be again Pure.

And it hurts to say that never once have I read
Or prayed to who sacrificed on my behalf instead
To confront my sins and to admit being misled
But I laugh so hard because I am Consciously Mad.

Sooner though and before me seeing That light
Before holding onto Him and taking my final flight
I would write these words for those who might
Read me fully and understand my poetry as bright.

And please take a good care of my sweet cat
To me, she was more than a simple human pet
She shared me my life and we together had had
That Love, since the day our dreamy eyes have met.

Saturday, December 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: consciousness,self reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Self Reflection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 20 December 2018

Write comment. A good start, Amine. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Naila Rais 09 December 2018

Really awesome start.......... Welcome to poem hunter....10 and more..... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too...... Naila

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Mohamed Amine 09 December 2018

Thank you my friend for your appreciation and time. Indeed we share the spirit of igniting the flame of night and fire. You are more than welcome to comment and give your feedback. Amine

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Chinedu Dike 08 December 2018

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Your knack for crafting your poems in beautiful rhyme scheme is not only appropriate, but poetically remarkable. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Mohamed and do remain enriched.

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Mohamed Amine Belhssen 09 December 2018

I really appreciate your time and remarks. We are all thriving to out-best our selves. Freedom means more poetry and more liberation from our mental chains. Thank you

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