The Worthless Cash Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Worthless Cash

Rating: 5.0


Spring without you
Rash
Flowers without you
Clash
Life is the worthless
Cash
I'll give you my soul
Stash

(2009/3/15)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The layout of this poem with every second line having only one word works really well. The poem is so well thought out and my favorite two lines 'Flowers without you clash'. Well done Persian! A ten from me. Karin Anderson

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Allan Macli Borges 22 March 2009

I know very well this feeling showed here... yes, sometimes we feel worthless if the most precious part of us is far away... please read my poem 'About Dama' (on how I wanted her before and how I miss her now) .

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Chitra - 16 March 2009

one word reveleations to the essence of life

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Catrina Heart 15 March 2009

imaginative creation nice rhymes, and nice choice of words....10

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