The Test Poem by Crystal Johnson

The Test

Rating: 3.8


Dont cry my children
You're safe with me
Your chains are broken
You now are free

You served me well
You did your best
but your time has come
And you passed your test

You're not being punished
But greatly rewarded
Yes, your old life has ended
But a better has started

Dont worry my children
Your loved ones are safe
I will protect them
They too have a place

They know you've been welcomed
In heaven above
They know you've been blessed
And given my love

So take my hand now
And you soon will see
my plan's been completed
'Cause of you believeing in me

I've waited so long
For this moment to come
So please trust in me
And I will take you home

See, your job you have done
And you did your best
but your time has come
And you passed your test.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 22 November 2005

Beautiful poem Crystal...I enjoyed it!

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Ernestine Northover 19 November 2005

Sweet poem Crystal, gives a nice feeling. Sincerely Ernestine

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Herbert Nehrlich1 19 November 2005

This is a good poem, it would be better if you could remember those apostrophes. Best wishes and welcome to P/H H

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Theorem Thetruthserum 18 November 2005

Cool stuff...we all should be rewarded for the good things that we do. This is a good way of rewarding someone you know. Good poem.

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Mary Nagy 18 November 2005

I forget what a spiritual background you have.........this is beautiful. sincerely, Mary

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Crystal Johnson

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Maury County, Tennessee
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