The Struggle Of A Flower Poem by Floyd Zimmerman

The Struggle Of A Flower

Rating: 5.0


So the day began with rain,
Thrown down in tantrums of tears.
I could only watch, in vain,
The struggle of a flower.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 29 September 2009

Even flowers have there days

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Omar Ibrahim 30 September 2009

simple but meaningful poem....entitled by an attention grabbing title.....really wonderful keep it up and send my greetings to the english people...

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Eyan Desir 30 September 2009

Short but leaves a reader pondering

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 30 September 2009

Short but DEEP. 10 for the SYMBOLISM

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Marieta Maglas 30 September 2009

nice poem...touching...10+

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Jen Capaldi 10 October 2009

a short on words poem that it certainly not short in deep symbolic meaning. a extrememly welled penned peice that cuts straight to the point. great poem my friend. as always, you have shown you are a wonderful poet my friend.10+++ Jen

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Lynda Robson 05 October 2009

Short but says so much 10 Lynda

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Luwi Habte 04 October 2009

wow, short but a nice piece well done luwi

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Ivor Hogg 04 October 2009

terse verse that packs a punch

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C. P. Sharma 01 October 2009

Feelingly penned poem. Tears are the distilled wisdom, the essence of the struggle for existence. CP

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