The Stolen Child Poem by Samantha Viles

The Stolen Child

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I was happy and free once upon a time
But now all I see is a great big line
A line that separated me and my life
Like a cake being cut with a cold knife

It can never be mended or put back together
Just sitting by its self, now and forever.
That’s how it felt losing all that I had
Losing it all over something terribly bad

Losing my home, losing my friends
I think about that now, until the day ends
Being taken to a place I had never been before
Opening up a really dark door

A door that lead to another world
A world of sadness, sorrow and nothing to do
Just sit and stare and sing a sad tune
Oh I miss my old life even though it was dry and dusty
But this world is definitely rusty

Rusty with happiness, rusty with cheer
Now all I have is a great big tear
I could never have stopped what happened that day
I was at school trying to play

That’s when he came and took me away
Put me on a train that led me to today
I was only young and didn’t understand
But now all I have is one demand

I want my old life back, I want to be free
I want the life that meant a lot more to me
My life up in dry country, the life that I knew
The life that I had something special to do.

But now it is too late, and I can never return
So I have to live with a heart that will continue to burn.

BY SAMANTHA VILES

Friday, February 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem from personal experiences
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 19 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Samantha. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 28 February 2015

Nice and well articulated narrative poem nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. Indeed, there's no place like home. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Lyn Paul 27 February 2015

Thank You Samantha. Heartfelt words which I had to re read. I hope your sun is now shining.

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Godfrey Morris 27 February 2015

Awesome poem. Love the poem though it made me sad.

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