Kishore Kumar Das

Gold Star - 16,381 Points (Cuttack, Odisha)

The Silvery Touch - Poem by Kishore Kumar Das

Moonlit night
dawn approaching
darkness fading out
the cool gentle breeze
with shining moonbeams
myself watching the moon
from my roof top
ohh...what a pleasant sensation
every part of my body
bathed in the moonlight
I was the recipient of joy
in the silent night:
Great is the creation of the Almighty.

Topic(s) of this poem: moon

Comments about The Silvery Touch by Kishore Kumar Das

  • Plabita Bhaskar (3/30/2017 1:59:00 AM)

    Moon a luminescence, its gleam a blessed glade. Its silver touch brushes all the glum away, coating silvery light all its way. A beautiful poem it is! ! thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Kishore Kumar Das Kishore Kumar Das (3/30/2017 6:10:00 AM)

    Thank you Plabita for your sweet comments..

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  • Randhir Kaur (8/25/2016 3:29:00 AM)

    Congratulations Sir...Again a beautiful poetry..
    Great is the creation of the Almighty....
    Some things are so alluring that even words fail to describe it..but u have explained the beauty as well as nature....And d picture reminds me of an old day of mine..Can relate it...
    Keep inspiring n writing Sir..All my best to you. Respect.
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  • Bernard Snyder (8/24/2016 10:36:00 PM)

    Nicely written poem! Congrats on having it chosen as ' poem of the day'! (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (8/24/2016 6:58:00 PM)

    Congratulations for the Poem of the Day! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2016 1:07:00 PM)

    My favourite object, the Moon. And this is a particularly good poem on this amazing object!
    Well done on poem of the day. Certainly deserved.
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  • Pamela Sinicrope (8/24/2016 12:46:00 PM)

    Congrats on poem of the day. This is a lovely piece of writing..I already commented, but I enjoyed reading it again and think your accolade is well deserved. Thanks for sharing your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O' Brian (8/24/2016 12:11:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for allowing us to share with you the beauty of this experience. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (8/24/2016 11:18:00 AM)

    I was carried away by this little poem. Felt like I was right there on the rooftop in that cool gentle breeze. Well done indeed! Congrats on poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (8/24/2016 10:15:00 AM)

    when feelings is real and TO THE heart content enjoying what is the function of language? ... what a word painting....the picture we can feel and we feel that as if we are on the roof for a has DE-familiarization touch Russian formalists points out......great. congratulations on being MPOTD. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (8/24/2016 8:57:00 AM)

    Lovely little poem aimed at highlighting the beauty of a moonlit night with a blissful pleasant sensation of the atmosphere. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for your selection for the day.
    every part of my body / bathed in the moonlight / I was the recipient of joy
    Great is the creation of the Almighty.
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  • (8/24/2016 8:38:00 AM)

    God's creation is indeed beautiful. Nothing more pleasant and serene than being out on a moon lit night. Thanks for sharing the poem. Happy Krishna Janmashtami to you. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (8/24/2016 7:18:00 AM)

    Great is the creation of the ALMIGHTY' Yes, so unspeakable and full of glory!
    Thanks for sharing, Kishore!
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  • (8/24/2016 5:32:00 AM)

    Fantastic narration of the sensations in the moonlit night has made this poem superb. Heartiest Congrta for inking it as also on it's Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/24/2016 5:22:00 AM)

    Darkness is fading out! ! With the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing. Having your peom as, poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (8/24/2016 4:11:00 AM)

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem and the beautiful pic of the moon...Congrats on being poet of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/24/2016 2:52:00 AM)

    receipient of joy in silent night - meaningful really, namaskar (Report) Reply

  • Judith Blatherwick (8/24/2016 2:12:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem this is. Moonlight is such special magic. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/24/2016 1:59:00 AM)

    A lovely poem, Kishore. I often go out at night and just sit alone and look at the moon.
    Congrats on poem of the day
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/24/2016 12:39:00 AM)

    Great is the creation of the Almighty. This is absolute truth and moonlight night witnesses this interestingly. Very amazing poem is drafted and shared really. Nice drafting.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Asis Biswas (8/13/2016 1:17:00 AM)

    with the beautiful poem, poet has added a picture.Poet, your way of writing is too much. very simple , no complexe anywhere at writie on light, light, and wind. (Report) Reply

    Kishore Kumar Das Kishore Kumar Das (8/13/2016 1:46:00 AM)

    Thank you Asis for your wonderful comments.....

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, August 22, 2016

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