Eloida Capuno


The Moon And I - Poem by Eloida Capuno

tonight i saw the moon
i thought i saw it smile
i lifted my teacup
it nodded in acceptance

the moon and me
we shared the tea
one sip each till
the cup ran empty

but soon dark clouds
shrouded its beauty
my moon is gone
so suddenly


Poet's Notes about The Poem

the poem is about relationships, people that come and go, leaving unexpectedly

Comments about The Moon And I by Eloida Capuno

  • Veteran Poet - 1,531 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (6/21/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    HALA, this is very beautiful
    moon is my favorite
    and i love the way you weave the words
    and show your connection to it.
    ang ganda naman
    ang husay mo naman
    MABUHAY KA. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Oludipe Oyin Samuel (6/6/2012 12:16:00 PM)

    Subtle and witty piece. I like its striking impact (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,563 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/1/2012 5:21:00 AM)

    Very good poem. I love it.
    I invite you to read my poem and comment
    Yours
    Gajanan Mishra (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 30, 2012


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