Eloida Capuno


Seduction


it did not escape me
those sideway glances
as you stood in that corner
i pretended to ignore
your magnetic presence
yet the unspoken language
of your desire
permeated my being

as i tried to catch your
fleeting gaze
you turned and walked away
i followed and met you there
we stared head on
a stranger to another
we understood

Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2012
Edited: Sunday, June 24, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Seduction by Eloida Capuno )

  • Rookie Oludipe Oyin Samuel (7/1/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    It moved me... The effect is intense from the words! Good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/24/2012 9:17:00 PM)

    we stared head on
    a stranger to another.......................
    heart rejoices by new born love
    like crescent moon fluxes to fulmination, quite passionate write, heart provoking, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (6/24/2012 8:57:00 PM)

    Wow! A very moving and thought provoking write! The mystery of love manifested clearly in another part of the world! Things happen for a reason and only time can tell the final results! Amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kaia Grønnbæck (6/24/2012 11:06:00 AM)

    Aaaawwww. I want moments like that [3 [3 [3 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,139 Points Tiku . (6/24/2012 7:52:00 AM)

    very nice.a sweet love poem with nice flow. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,213 Points Ric S. Bastasa (6/24/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    well done....makes me feel younger (Report) Reply

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