Eloida Capuno

Seduction - Poem by Eloida Capuno

it did not escape me
those sideway glances
as you stood in that corner
i pretended to ignore
your magnetic presence
yet the unspoken language
of your desire
permeated my being

as i tried to catch your
fleeting gaze
you turned and walked away
i followed and met you there
we stared head on
a stranger to another
we understood

Comments about Seduction by Eloida Capuno

  • Gold Star - 50,292 Points Chinedu Dike (6/20/2015 1:29:00 PM)

    Very romantic poem. The magnetic attraction occasioned by vain glorification of beauty, well depicted in the poem. An elegantly written piece of poetry, well articulated with insight. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Oludipe Oyin Samuel (7/1/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    It moved me... The effect is intense from the words! Good job (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,987 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/24/2012 9:17:00 PM)

    we stared head on
    a stranger to another.......................
    heart rejoices by new born love
    like crescent moon fluxes to fulmination, quite passionate write, heart provoking, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Romeo Della Valle (6/24/2012 8:57:00 PM)

    Wow! A very moving and thought provoking write! The mystery of love manifested clearly in another part of the world! Things happen for a reason and only time can tell the final results! Amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kaia Grønnbæck (6/24/2012 11:06:00 AM)

    Aaaawwww. I want moments like that [3 [3 [3 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,105 Points Anil Kumar Panda (6/24/2012 7:52:00 AM)

    very nice.a sweet love poem with nice flow. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,919 Points Ric S. Bastasa (6/24/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    well done....makes me feel younger (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 24, 2012

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