Seduction Poem by Eloida Capuno

Seduction

Rating: 5.0


it did not escape me
those sideway glances
as you stood in that corner
i pretended to ignore
your magnetic presence
yet the unspoken language
of your desire
permeated my being

as i tried to catch your
fleeting gaze
you turned and walked away
i followed and met you there
we stared head on
a stranger to another
we understood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ric Bastasa 24 June 2012

well done....makes me feel younger

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2012

very nice.a sweet love poem with nice flow.

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Chinedu Dike 20 June 2015

Very romantic poem. The magnetic attraction occasioned by vain glorification of beauty, well depicted in the poem. An elegantly written piece of poetry, well articulated with insight. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 01 July 2012

It moved me... The effect is intense from the words! Good job

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 June 2012

we stared head on a stranger to another....................... heart rejoices by new born love like crescent moon fluxes to fulmination, quite passionate write, heart provoking, thanks for sharing

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Romeo Della Valle 24 June 2012

Wow! A very moving and thought provoking write! The mystery of love manifested clearly in another part of the world! Things happen for a reason and only time can tell the final results! Amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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Kaia Grønnbæck 24 June 2012

Aaaawwww. I want moments like that [3 [3 [3

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