don’t be sad
my dearest sun
the moon is here
to share your light..
night looks forlorn
lack of glaring shine
billows appear gloomy
warning of a lonely night..
when hope appears doubtful
and your feelings are hurt
no one listens, no one cares
just wait till the morning comes
i will bring all the hopes
reveal the unspoken words
and untie your worries...
I have also requested Sulaiman to continue in PH as he was taking farewell from his friends in PH. Hope he will continue with all our requestes.
Dear NAIZZ (LADY GRACE) , I don't know how and whom to address. Suleman's poem I'm yet to read and comment upon.While I was in Singapore, we couldn't meet due to his pre-occupation in business overseas. He is a nice man. Your poem depicts the feelings sensibly and emotionaly.Only two suggestion to maintain the flow properly. choice, of course, is yours. In L 3 & 4, this might look better: 'the moon is here to share your light' and L 7-'billows appear gloomy' Rated high Rajkumar.
don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light.. very slow and sad write, your style is very beautiful
don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light...nothignto worry so long as somebody is there to share with...life will be dead without anybody in life... i liked it most.....10 anywhere...butterflies around.....
A fne tribute to the masterful Brett....I know that he will cherish your words my dear friend.....thanks for the share of your beautiful soul 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmmm? very poetic nice touch