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The wedding

i wake up early dawn
to witness the changes in sky
from darkness to morn
for a new bride tonight..

the pain is still here
with sadness and anger
today may be the end
tomorrow is never a fine..

this man who'll be my groom
is as good as Homer
a monster from the north
captured me as his lover..

i never love this man before
but he never let me go
he give me no freedom
only to find..i love him too....

for all those days of confusions
my hours filled with loneliness
all i see is his perfect love
a true love which is always the best...

perhaps it's just a fair
to think that i am a bride to be
morning comes with no illusion
a celebration for wedding anniversary..

and as the ceremony starts
my eyes filled with tears
he is lying in white satin
while everybody stands with me...

today...as we celebrate our anniversary
no other words i can say
i love you so much
'happy silver wedding anniversary'

Submitted: Wednesday, June 03, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, June 08, 2010


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  • Eyan Desir (4/24/2010 4:45:00 PM)

    Well happy annivery indeed...
    good write

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    wake up early dawn
    to witness the changes in sky
    from darkness to morning light
    for a new bride tonight..yes and reminds of olden days and sweet memeories to be cherished.... lovely poems with clear hear and feelings....10

  • James James (6/27/2009 12:44:00 PM)

    not only the hearts screwed up

  • Salu Salu (6/21/2009 3:39:00 AM)

    you simply make magic in writing.....so vividly narrates..and you had all the hearts screwed up................
    salu.

  • Sadiqullah Khan (6/16/2009 5:24:00 AM)

    You are already a star, grace, what if we comment or not, still the joy of reading this piece was immense.10

  • Raghavan Warrier (6/16/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. I wonder how many thousands of poems are already written on the subject of love. But this haunting piece (with a touch of feeling similar to 'Wuthering Heights') with contrasting imagery and an unexpected ending convinces me that beautiful poems can still be written by a highly creative mind.

  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    A great poem where in the human emotions are expressed with out any inhibitions. Kudos.

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (6/15/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    I celebrate my fiftieth wedding anniversay on th 20th of this month.Sometimes marriage is very hard.

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani (6/15/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    The end of the story surprise me in sadness, it's like a real piece which i saw with my own eyes, tks for sharing

  • Rafique Farooqi (6/14/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    it is beautifully written....earlier it looked a dream but you told it is real, at morning.....at the end it shaked me....omg....
    leaving movie like imprint on my imagery.... great.

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