Bubbling feet and slumbering eyes
Where inhabits the moon
Must be a paradise
The title is very catchy and the treatment given to it in the poem is awesome- Far from the madding crowd. Thanks a lot, Deepak ji.
Eyes on slumber in moonlit brings sweet dream of paradise. Nice imaginative poem shared astutely. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful Haiku. An interesting way to paradise.
Many many thanks.......Geetha.........I am humbled.....and I am happy to hear from you once again and indeed you leave me more composed and happy than I have been for many days.