The Lunatic (Haiku) Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

The Lunatic (Haiku)



Bubbling feet and slumbering eyes
Where inhabits the moon
Must be a paradise

Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: insanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 24 November 2017

Beautiful Haiku. An interesting way to paradise.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 November 2017

Many many thanks.......Geetha.........I am humbled.....and I am happy to hear from you once again and indeed you leave me more composed and happy than I have been for many days.

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Rajnish Manga 24 November 2017

The title is very catchy and the treatment given to it in the poem is awesome- Far from the madding crowd. Thanks a lot, Deepak ji.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 November 2017

Many many thanks......Rajnishji........I am humbled

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Eyes on slumber in moonlit brings sweet dream of paradise. Nice imaginative poem shared astutely. Thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 November 2017

Many many thanks.....Kumarmaniji........I am humbled

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