Jack Growden

Rookie - 278 Points (1997 / Townsville, Australia)

The Lucky Country Poem by Jack Growden

The mists of morning settle low
Upon Mt Gambier’s Great Blue Lake.
Testing the limits of the naked eye,
It encompasses everything in its wake.

There’s not a breath of wind across the plains,
As the trees refuse to sway.
The desert chill that marked the night
Will soon give way to the heat of the day.

Turning far away to the east,
A world apart from the Outback’s roast,
The first few rays of glorious sunlight
Teeter brightly across the coast.

Flocks of magpies and kookaburras
Sound out the old stockmen’s alarm.
On horseback the workers trot off
To toil upon their farms.

Hunting their prey down in the Bight,
Where the water stretches great miles,
Riding the sea are the tuna boats
Bringing home dinner with their various styles.

It’s eight in the morning in Sydney
And the traffic has reached its peak.
Juggling papers and coffee and briefcases too,
A steady wage awaits by the end of the week.

Though they’d all rather be in paradise:
Strolling the beaches of the Gold and Sunny shores,
Where children bathe in crystal swells
Untouched by plague or imminent wars.

Far to the south and it’s time for the game
Which divides this tiny Vic town.
Two thousand crammed into the country ground
To support their boys: the gold and brown.

Worlds away from Euroa it’s beer o’clock
Amongst Darwin’s sweltering heat.
Where men raise a toast to this lucky land,
For living Down Under was hard to beat!

Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 23, 2013

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Copyright Jack Growden 2010. A tribute to my homeland of Australia...the luckiest country on Earth. Written a while ago.


Jack Growden (C) 2010

Comments about this poem (The Lucky Country by Jack Growden )

  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (10/19/2013 4:00:00 PM)

    Thanks Diane. We truly do live in a wonderful country. I would highly recommend Darwin...for all its poor reputation, it is a lovely place to visit.100km south is Litchfield National Park - a must visit. Thanks again for reading. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,478 Points Diane Hine (10/19/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    I think you've captured the essence. There are so many places I haven't been yet - Darwin for instance. I like Mt Gambier's Lake. Enjoyable poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (10/18/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    Unbelievable feedback, Patricia! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,371 Points Patricia Grantham (10/18/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    Another excellent write my young poet friend. You are very fortunate to
    live an an area that is so beautifully depicted in you poem. The countryside,
    the birds and animals. What a picture you have painted. Just lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (10/13/2013 4:13:00 AM)

    Thank you sincerely for your feedback Guy. Please keep reading my work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 115 Points Guy Lip-more (10/12/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    Excellent my fellow poet, very expressive, really enjoyed this. (Report) Reply

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