The Love Between Mars And Snake Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

The Love Between Mars And Snake



In the name of love, the lord of our hearts,

Let me to say you a story, it never hurts

Of the galaxy and the solar way,

There was a planet that shone in day

Its name was "Mars", great and powerful

It was a little hard, but prideful

There, inside it, with the red stones those just beat

There was a Strange and powerful "Snake" that doesn't hit

They live with each other day and nights,

But they didn't know that they are each other knights

Here the story comes:

A night, when the sky was calm and stars were down,

When the mars was thinking, blinking, at the dawn,

He saw a strange, beauty and unbelievable star,

That was shining like a diamond exactly in the bar,

That star was colorful_ and simple _ though

The mars loved it, liked it although

Mars just looked at that strange nature,

It was strange for him, such a unique creature

Such a UN forgetful vision,

But it was so painful for him, such a scission

Because that star shakes his heart and his lovely feelings,

His soul was thirsty for feeding

Then, a Love contract between them signed,

They will stay with each other to the day of die

They were honest in their love, none of them tinker,

Because they believe who does it is a Stinker,

Of a powerful expression in our life,

They believe and so we do, that love will keep us alive.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i write and offer this poem to the person who i love the most in my life. he is my every thing and the best person in my life. his name is The soul of Mars. Soul of Mars I LOVE YOU FOR EVER
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 07 July 2012

I read this poem few times as i a bit confuse with the snake and then how it became a star....but then i get my head clear and i understand what it about, Mars love stars...a far distance, the love universe so shiny in dark space...It really a good poem, but do u know in mars there are martians...maybe they can steal your red stone away and bring it to saturn (The place where captain cur lived once) hahhahhaa joking...keep wrting good poetry! _Unwritten Soul

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Captain Cur 07 July 2012

Great honest poem! I loved the rhyme between tinker and stinker. Those words were funny but true!

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

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