The Lines Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

The Lines

Rating: 5.0


Anytime in our life
An inauspicious thing can come
Nobody knows of its coming
And what it can bring to us
Some people who don't care about it;
They say, no one can prophesy
the glimpse of its precursors,
And even can think of how it ends.
Sometimes a shrewd action
may result in failure
And soft action brings success too.
Remember a shoal of fish will not
be trapped in a narrow net as always.
There is a way to this,
Look into your palm of right hand
and see how many lines are there
not intertwined with each other.
Those who can count these lines
without much effort and any error
Will get the panacea to all.

Sunday, September 11, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: mystery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

It is not failure or success we should look but whether we have put 100% effort or not is more important as said by the poet! We can expect anything, anything may happen abruptly! I like the way how pet shaped his poem. You got A1 grade for this poem! Cheers!

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