your sun won't descend
from now till the end
come on great poet
teach us poetry
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Beautiful tribute... Your words intoned a sort of mesmerizing chant. Wonderful work, Thanks :) ... Marina
raise your voice and let's sing together O fallen leaf, O fallen feather! ....................l est mankind may resurge from ruin entwined voices may glorify fallen.........wonderful write of tribute to the poet,1o++, thanks for sharing
Indeed a great poetry but one can expose not impose in creative pursuits… In my knowledge [I beg your excuse] poetry is matter of inside of poet where no one can enter … Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
A great tribute to Ahmad, a friend of mine here at poemhunter. A very meaningful poem to your dear friend and poet. A very good write. Your friend Lynn
: ( Even though i didnt know who you were talking about, I still liked this poem! ! It reads very well....has i kind of flow and melody to it.
Yes, Ahmad deserves lot more tribute from more poets specially for his voracious reading and wide knowledge....I join you with my salutes to Ahmad
I too have that passion for music and know how it feels to play a piece that means more to you than just the ink on the paper, good job
'raise your voice and let's sing together O fallen leaf, O fallen feather! '- it is for lines such as this that I have weathered many a storm in the search..fine writing.
Omar, It is quite apparent that your homage to your greatly admired poet friend has not only touched his heart but all of ours as well. i (and many others i am sure) could only dream that one day somene would see us in the same light and pay homage to us that way. kudos my poet friend. another great work! Jen
This is a poem of praise to a great poet of poetry (I read and commented on 'A blissful') Wish' that the 'sun wont decend on from now to the end'.Your poem praise his teaching us poetry; an aria teaching us songs of poetry' telling tales of Indonesis, and 'lessons of life's fate, forgivness and happiness.' through this poem, I've meet another poet friend-again thanks for sharing this well deserved 10+++ poem
Hi Omar, The poem & the legend, match each other perfectly! !
great poem, great expresions, great rhymes, great idea, everything in that poem is wonderful well written 10++++! ! ! !
i like ur way of expressing &talking about subjects &it's good 2 speak about ur friend.10+++&this poem deserves more, thanks.
A good tribute, I liked the opening rhymed couplet and the repeat of the device at the end but think a little more work is needed.