The Last Breaths Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Last Breaths

Rating: 4.8


So you came at last,
The candle's flame,
In the winds of time,
Vibrated with all her might,
To survive for a moment,
To have a look at you,
And to kiss your lips,
But the dry tongue,
And the deceptive breaths,
Kept the candle silent,
The faithful eyes,
Did their best,
You read the blue stars,
Came close to the candle,
The candle smiled,
And the threads were broken,
The candle extinguished with years old thirst,
You felt the heat could not burn your lips,
The fumes dispersed and disappeared.

The Last Breaths
Monday, February 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farhan Mirza 18 February 2015

This poem was so sweet. I loved the description.

1 0 Reply
Bisma Mirza 17 February 2015

brilliant Poem..... great! ! !

1 0 Reply
Khalid Saifullah 16 February 2015

A heart touching expression through a lovely poem......................10

1 0 Reply
Valsa George 16 February 2015

To survive for a moment, To have a look at you, And to kiss your lips, love remains till the last embers get extinguished! Beautiful write!

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success