The Garrulous Din Poem by Indira Renganathan
The Garrulous Din
Often she feels she is done under
A guillotine
Her beheaded body tremulates
Like the quaked earth
A gruff voice of needless words
Reverberates nightlong
It is he, her rough man
In gruff tone
Spews all the rubbish hustle-bustle
Clamoring from the office hubub
Nonstop for hours
A pain in the neck between her
Mind and heart in daily routine
What's wrong if
Often she feels she is done under
A guillotine
A sad poem. Yeah her suffering has no end. She must be feeling like dead. Nice write.
I love the poem in general but the ending is very powerful
Congratulations Dear Poet Indira. This powerful poem is ranked #93 among the Best Member Poems on PoemHunter today. Fantastic achievement. All the best, dear poet.
A heart-rending poem. A vivid depiction of domestic abuse and never-ending sadness and difficulties on the part of a wife. A well expressed poem.
A poignant poem depicting a nagging and abusive husband written with deep insight. A highly relatable experience. Thanks for sharing this brilliant creation of yours with us, madam.
Power of emotions and creativity combined so well what the poet wants to express. five + for this one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A difficult subject to talk to her husband about. Perhaps if she invited her female friends around when he's there and she can gossip with them to annoy him? ? ? Good poem Indira.