The Furious Wind - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Furious Wind - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


The wind is furious
And it is whistling so loud
A magical song
That envelops everyone
All succumb to its power.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 09 September 2021

As you described this Tanka about The Furious Wind I can feel how strong the movings are, a true powerful Tanka 5 Stars full

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 September 2021

The furious wind and the magical song make a brilliant Tanka dear Rose.....

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Nabakishore Dash 10 September 2021

Excellent and very precise, but 100% true.

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Varsha M 11 September 2021

Indeed we sll submit to the power of wind as mindmill or sailing a boat or bringing dark clouds sometimes they make us fly in wind like in hurricane. Good thought.

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Anjandev Roy 17 September 2021

All succumb to its power.....significant.

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Anjandev Roy 11 January 2023

All succumb to its power......brilliantly penned....thank u....

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Anjandev Roy 22 August 2022

Lovely piece.....love to read it time and again....

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Soran M. H 30 October 2021

The wind is furious And it is whistling so loud A magical song

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Soran M. H 30 October 2021

part1 This high-quality type of poems is called simple and abstaining, because its language use to be easy, but going deeper into it makes us say that it is deep and not easy.

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Soran M. H 30 October 2021

part2 if we deal with the nature in appropriate ways and respectfully that is fine, but if nature is angry, it has reasons. This metaphor in poetry makes it more valuable. For example, a human whistles and gets angry,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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