The wind is furious
And it is whistling so loud
A magical song
That envelops everyone
All succumb to its power.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
The furious wind and the magical song make a brilliant Tanka dear Rose.....
Indeed we sll submit to the power of wind as mindmill or sailing a boat or bringing dark clouds sometimes they make us fly in wind like in hurricane. Good thought.
All succumb to its power......brilliantly penned....thank u....
part1 This high-quality type of poems is called simple and abstaining, because its language use to be easy, but going deeper into it makes us say that it is deep and not easy.
part2 if we deal with the nature in appropriate ways and respectfully that is fine, but if nature is angry, it has reasons. This metaphor in poetry makes it more valuable. For example, a human whistles and gets angry,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As you described this Tanka about The Furious Wind I can feel how strong the movings are, a true powerful Tanka 5 Stars full