The Gelly Haired Head Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Gelly Haired Head

Rating: 5.0


Oh, sweat droplets
From your gelly haired
Big head
A real treat
To all the flies
That hover over
Your head.

Thursday, November 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 26 April 2018

A jelly hared cocoction has underneath a jelly brain. ++10

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A fascinating comment, Robert. Thank you for your visit and time.

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Mr. Mister 10 April 2018

Now I know, I don't have to use gelly. Interesting poem. Liked it.

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Glad you liked it. Thank you for your visit.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2018

A short and sweet poem......Thanks for sharing.....10

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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2019

Beautifully depicted. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Prabir Gayen 04 September 2019

Oh, sweat droplets From your gelly haired Big head A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 August 2019

A fun little poem, dear ate Rose...10+++

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Prabir Gayen 20 July 2019

Oh, , sweat droplets From your gelly haired Big head A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head.... very sweet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2019

Oh, sweat droplets....the delicacy in this address makes this poem endearing! My pleasure revisiting this beautiful work!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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