The Fallen People Poem by TREVOR LEWIS BERRYANN

The Fallen People

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People you may know or
People you may see you should
Remember them well because
They're most likely the ones fighting
For our lives or the people you love the most.

I knew one person he wasn’t a war
Hero he was the person I loved the most
Other then my Mom, Dad or brother,
He was my cousin and I will miss him.

So remember to spend time with them
Because they're the ones you may never
See again so remember the fallen people
You loved the most.


In loving memory of my cousin Craig Still

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick A. Martin 30 August 2009

thank you for the reminder Trevor it is important that we respect those who give everything there is for a human being to give in the service of their nation and that we remember those we have loved and lost -- 'Lest We Forget' 10

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Rehana Nazli 30 August 2009

that's so true Trevor the people we love may depart amytime...read my poem; my departed friend..it is in memory of a dear friend'd loss

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Patti Masterman 30 August 2009

I'm sad for you loss but it's good to write about it. I think it is a good sign he looks happy in your dreams. I think it means that you perceive that he died doing what he wanted to be doing; so in a way his life was very successful. Not many of us actually die doing the thing we wished to do most of all. That is just one interpretation, however. Great writing: and try to remember the good times the most.

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Danny H 04 October 2009

Great Advice ill keep this i mind :) keep writing

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Beauty Philosophy 31 August 2009

A well-penned poem and a good message. Good write!

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A very special poem and reminder to treasure the love we feel for another and show these feelings with love and grace. Your poem is heartfelt and it really touched my heart.....10 love Karin

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

Finely penned dear lil poet! bravo! ! well done! 10+

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Marieta Maglas 31 August 2009

well written poem, touching, thank you for sharing......................10+++

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