The Evil In Love? Poem by naomi deluca

The Evil In Love?

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When the love was great,
The pain is even greater than your mate

When the love was inseparable,
The longing will be utterly unbearable

When the love was all you ever had,
The hole and emptiness will be enough to make you mad

When the love was sacred, pure
The pain will be enough to endure

Love is evil it's true i see
I lock away my heart with a key

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 18 April 2010

Love can be evil, but you're young enough to recover and start anew. A very touching poem, well written. Your friend Lynn

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Michael Brock 18 April 2010

Very powerful and full of passion. Well written and good flow of imagery. thanks for sharing Michael

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