The Eclipse (Haiku) Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

The Eclipse (Haiku)

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Finally the sun
Was spotted loving and sleeping
In the lap of moon

Saturday, November 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: decline,shade,veil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 30 December 2017

i like this, deepak! pleasant, tender. i need to do this myself and go back through my postings, i.e., recategorize some of what i called haiku to senryu. haiku, technically speaking, has a reference in the first line that anchors it in a particular season. when not there, but in the same form as this poem of yours, it's senryu. -glen

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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2017

Amazing expression. Nice poetic interpretation. Thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 November 2017

Many many thanks........Rajnishji..........I am humbled

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 November 2017

A cleverly write about the sun and the moon.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 November 2017

Many many thanks........Juan-austin...........I am humbled

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