The Cleansing Poem by Earl Moore

The Cleansing

Rating: 5.0


the cleansing
In a grand courtyard, as flowers surround
An old water well many ages revealed
Special memories of diseases being healed
With stories and legends that resound.

One day walking in this courtyard
Vivid thoughts of mom’s sickness – so hard
In a grand courtyard, as flowers surround
Stands old water well many ages revealed

A wish for mom desiring her healing
Prayers poured as the silver dollar fell
Wanting God to deliver that final spell
Mom now experiencing a complete cleansing
In a grand courtyard, as flowers surround.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 06 July 2009

Almost thought this one was working into a villanelle. I like the thought and the recurring lines. Adeline

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Earl Moore

Earl Moore

Montgomery, Alabama
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